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How to Write a Thank You Email After an Interview (Without Making It Weird)

Jul 31
3 min read

Most candidates walk out of an interview, exhale, and start refreshing their inbox. Very few do the one thing that costs nothing, takes ten minutes, and quietly separates them from every other person interviewed that week.

They send a thank you email.

Hiring managers consistently say they notice them, yet only a small fraction of candidates ever send one. That is a rare thing in a job search: an advantage almost nobody bothers to take.


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First, a quick story

A client of ours, we will call him Dave, once interviewed for an operations role he badly wanted. Great interview, great rapport. That night he carefully wrote his thank you email, polished every sentence, and hit send feeling like a professional.

The next morning he reread it and went cold. The final line said, "I would be thrilled to bring my experience to [Insert Company Name]."

He had built his email from a template and forgotten to fill in the one blank that mattered. Dave figured the job was gone, so he sent a second email: "As you can see from my previous message, attention to detail is a work in progress. It is also why I always build in a review step, which I clearly should have applied to my own inbox. I remain very keen on the role, placeholder and all."

The hiring manager replied within the hour, laughing. Dave got a second interview, and eventually the job. Two lessons there. Proofread before you send. And if you do stumble, a bit of honesty and humour recovers almost anything.


When to send it

Within 24 hours of the interview, and ideally the same day. Any later and the panel may have already met to compare notes. If you interviewed on a Friday, send it that afternoon rather than letting it sit over the weekend.

Send it to the person who interviewed you. If it was a panel, email the main contact and ask them to pass on your thanks, or email each person individually if you have their addresses. Individual emails should not be identical, because they will compare.


What to actually write

Keep it short. Five or six lines is plenty. Here is the structure.

A clear subject line. "Thank you, Marketing Coordinator interview" does the job.

Open with genuine thanks. One line. "Thank you for taking the time to speak with me yesterday about the Marketing Coordinator role."

Reference something specific from the conversation. This is the line that matters most, because it proves the email is not a template. "I really enjoyed hearing about the rebrand planned for next year, and it got me thinking about the campaign work I led in my current role."

Reinforce your fit in one sentence. "The role feels like a strong match for my experience in fast moving retail environments, and the team culture you described is exactly what I am looking for."

If you fumbled something in the interview, you can briefly fix it here. "You asked about my experience with Xero. On reflection I should have mentioned I also spent two years using MYOB, which covers similar ground." One sentence, no grovelling.

Close simply. "Thanks again for your time. I am very interested in the role and happy to provide anything further you need."

That is the whole email. No essays, no poetry, no desperation.


What to avoid

Do not gush. "It would be the honour of my life to join your organisation" is a lot for an office admin role.

Do not write a second cover letter. If your thank you email needs scrolling, it is too long.

Do not chase. One thank you email, then wait. Following up daily does not read as enthusiasm, it reads as pressure.

And learn from Dave: read it twice before you send it, and check every name. Thanking the wrong company is the only version of this email that hurts you.


The bottom line

A thank you email will not rescue a terrible interview, but hiring decisions are often close calls between similar candidates. When it comes down to two people and only one of them followed up with warmth and professionalism, that detail can tip the scales.

Of course, none of this matters until your resume actually gets you into the interview chair.


That is our job. At Shortlist Resumes we build resumes and application documents that get you shortlisted, and our book Get Shortlisted, available on Amazon, walks you through the entire process, from application to offer. The small touches win jobs. This is one of the smallest, and one of the most effective.







 
 
 

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